Liked: Amazing aesthetics. I really liked the vibe of this game. The music also fits in really well with the story.
Could Improve: I wished there was more involved gameplay. There are a few sections where instead of long starches of story you could move to reach the story points. Also while I love the story you were going for the ending doesn't hold the same impact.
Additional Comments: As I said in the liked section, I loved the aesthetics of the game from the color pallets to the 3d models and the sprites. While it doesn't have much interaction what is there is already commendable for a week. Good work!