I liked the narrative, even though I think it could be developed a little further, and I absolutely loved the immersive 2D pixel art and the overall atmosphere!
Just be careful with some of the typos. I also noticed that the dialogue sometimes goes way too fast, which makes it difficult to read everything in time.
I really liked the mechanic of being able to wander around and explore freely. It actually kinda reminded me of Pokémon, which I really enjoyed! However, I sometimes got stuck, and it felt like there might have been a few bugs. There were also moments when I wasn't really sure where I was supposed to go next, especially when the characters started talking about the church.
One other thing I noticed was the scale of the church. It didn't really seem proportional to the other buildings and elements in the game, so it stood out a little compared to the rest of the environment.
After the church event, I had no idea where to go or what to do next, despite wandering around the map several times trying to figure it out. The girl was also still there even though she had supposedly been taken away, so I wasn't really sure what was happening there or whether it was a bug.
Overall, though, I really enjoyed the narrative, exploration, and pixel-art atmosphere!