It's a shame you had limited time for this jam! This track sounds really pretty and definitely has the cinematic quality you wanted but doesn't stand out melodically. It would be cool to hear this with a bit more sauce added to it (but that might be my personal bias towards attention-grabbing tracks :P)
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Thank you, appreciate the listen and feedback!
Yeah, also feel it needs something a bit more melodically. Listening to some of the other similar tracks in this jam, there some great subtle work done behind the main melodies, which I've really been enjoying. Adds so much depth. Def want to do a post-jam version and really nail down those intricacies. And a good bias to have, it's called "attention-grabbing for a reason"!