Nice work! I think you’ve done really well conveying a sense of melancholy and intrigue, and I definitely hear the World of Goo inspirations. The synths in particular contribute to this pretty well. Certainly, there is room to improve this track; some parts feel a little bit overpowering and make a bit of audio tearing, so maybe adjusting some volumes here and there can help with that. It also felt a little bit repetitive at times, perhaps introducing a different instrument or more distinct set of melodies can help mix things up. But overall well done!