Peace: LOVE this plucked tremolo sound! Extraordinarily cool sound, and something I would have LOVED to have access to for my soundtrack. What a gorgeous, ethereal sound, very folksy in that timeless, intriguing way.
Radiance: musically, this is quite flawless, and exemplary. You’ve layered several things to create this cool dirge, and it sounds truly medieval. My only issues are with the mix: the background noise from the recording of the lyre is quite present, especially when the recording starts. Next time, trim the silence and fade it in, so the background noise at least creeps in. You can also use an EQ to try and lower the noisy frequencies, or lower your mic sensitivity. Also, there are times where some instruments get quite out of sync with the track—careful with tempo!
In all, this is my one of my favorites Ive heard thus far just because I admire your use of the lyre and live recordings. If you can iron out the mixing issues, the sky’s the limit for you. I’d love to see this expanded out into a more comprehensive soundtrack! Great work, and keep writing!