It's almost too much to judge in one go! How you came up with so many ideas that feel fleshed out and coherent is astonishing. It really feels like you had fun with it too, can't wait to hear what others think of this.
Grew up on Yes, Dream Theatre, Haken, so I appreciate the use of time signatures. It always fit and was in service to the sound of the music overall.
The start of Incomplete knowledge was giving "ritual of the ancestors", I kinda hope that gives some inspiration.