i like your composition here!! i see some folks talking about dissonance being distracting, but i kind of disagree. I think you've done it thoughtfully. at 0:56, the chord you use serves as a transition point to a nice resolution. from a classical theory standpoint, it serves its role! i also like your addition of simple percussion through the latter half. nicely done! i do think the mixing is a lil unclear - the lower end is a bit louder, and i think you might've turned up the higher end to try and balance it out instead of turning down the lower. it's not super distracting though and not a super big deal. love your chord progression, and the instrumentation is very nice! really enjoyed listening to this, thanks for sharing :)
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Thank you! I do agree with the others that at a few points, the dissonance may have been a little bit too much, but I'm glad to hear that you liked it! Music is usually subjective after all and I'm really glad to see all these different perspectives on my submission. I also do agree that I need to focus on mixing more as opposed to treating it more as a final ornamentation or an after thought.