The writting is well done, you obviously know what you are doing with orchestration and arrangement. Some frequencies do sound a little too harsh, especially when the hurdy-gurdy (I think ?) and flutes play along, so you can improve mixing, but it's not a full on bad mix either, far from it. I also had to put my amp to quite the big volume to hear the third track well enough (the first half especially) so you can improve the normalization.
Otherwise, really great ! The music is captivating, would make for awesome BGM in a video game. GG !