I really would have liked more description about the songs besides that they are based off a poem. Such as the poem lines themselves.
I think the waves in the first song are a bit too loud compared to the instruments. Well the mixing for the whole entry is sort of off. Like volume wise for instruments.
The second song doesn't sound very good to me. I have no clue if that is intentional dissonance though because there is no description. Theres just too much stuff going on and none of it really feels cohesive.
Same goes for the 3rd track. The cymbals get rather annoying after a bit and it began to bother my ears.