Wow, it's truly impressive how much you made in just a week. I especially liked that there were some mini-games to make everything more participative. It would have felt even better if there was more feedback on how well you're doing. I had to repeat the second chapter 3 times and was left guessing what I really might have done wrong.
The visual cuteness clashing with the type of narrative is an interesting choice. I think I would've liked to find something more light-hearted, but this isn't bad either!