Congratulations for your entry! The story was quite captivating and you managed to convey it through your music.
I particularly enjoyed how you managed to exploit the instruments and their features to show different shades of the same place, be it a passage from one section to another (especially when going towards the next track) or be it leaving a single instrument alone, just like the protagonist of the story near the end.
The only thing that kept me from 100% appreciating it was the lack of reverb somehow, especially on the snare. But the more I kept going on, the more I loved what you managed to come up with.
Good job, it was a pleasant experience!