THIS WAS GREAT!!!!
I was so immersed throughout. The way you handle the narrative is so well done!! It felt like I was watching a movie? It was so immersive, maybe because the text only progresses after you click, and the visual effects and the sound effects were SO good. The back and fourth pacing between the present/past was very cool, and it was done so naturally.
And for the writing.. I loved the atmosphere. The setting with the Thirst and the shelters, it makes you really wonder what happened in this world, the vibe is very post-apocalyptic and dark.. it was awesome. I also found myself rooting for the two characters the entire time....TT..Just wondering, are you planning to develop more chapters?? I really would love to know if they've reached the shelter and if Zenka actually develops feelings for him, if it will be a happy ending for them, and also maybe get more exposition on the environment as well. Anyhow, thank you for making this, this was such a fun experience!!