Maybe it’s because I’m very jet lagged but the first two tracks were hard to keep engaged with. I found your last track (end of the world) was able to pull me in a bit more and I felt more connected to your harmonic movements. The first two felt very similar. I agree with other commenters that more dynamics may help. That being said I think this is pretty on point for music conveying the story you described! Im also very tired so maybe not your target audience lol.