Nice work! I like the development in the first tracks with the symphonic accompaniment, while the harp and piano kept the same repeating figure. I would've liked to see more variety in the piano and harp, rather than them just playing in unison. Also, the harmonic change at the end is super sick with that major 7 extension, but I think you could have led into that a bit more clearly. Part of it could have been the chord voicing and mixing being a bit muddy with the timpani and horns. The 2nd track is so organic and lovely sounding. It feels like a mystical area with undertones of melancholy, with the natural minor sound you got. The droplets add a nice soundscape layer as well. Good job!!
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Thank you for taking the time to listen and comment, Andrew!
I agree, it might feel kind of bland, but at the same time it seemed to me that adding too much texture to such a simple arpeggio when everything else is happening outside the piano and harp part felt overwhelming. I couldn't come up with anything different but for the harp to stress the last four notes of the arpeggio. The poor mixing definitely is the responsible for the lack of clarity in that sudden modulation.
Thanks again!