Intro - You have a good instinct for when to shift register. I like The key changes were very well chosen and placed I thought. I hope that cadence gets resolved somewhere down the line!
Forgotten seeds - Very grand crescendo throughout the track, especially with the shifting between tonic major and minor. Perhaps strings could have a bit more stage mic, if impossible, and the celli were a bit too far back in the mix for me.
The twisted man - I can see why Danny Elfman was brought up, those parallel minor chords are very evocative. The bouncy motif worked well in winds and strings but felt a bit off in horns, maybe it's a velocity or expression thing, or too much legato. Same with the low brass at the end.
The voyage - Great use of winds and harp for textural composing. Similar criticism of the horns here, but i think it might just be the limitation of the software. You have a great sense of when a phrase needs to be cut a bar short or be held longer for a bar or two, it makes the music very exciting to listen to.
Whispers - Great variation on the twisted man theme, couldn't ask for anything more.
Finale - Awesome conclusion. Reminded me of Reprise from spirited away, with the passing around of the motif, the minor section and then the build up to the key change passing the motif to low strings. The ending was a bit abrupt, felt like you could have milked it more, and ending on the subdominant left it feeling a bit inconclusive.
Fantastic submission, had a lot of fun listening!