I think the story is really well told by your music, it is rich and has a great atmosphere and style ! It reminds me of games I could play on a Gamecube. I'm fond of the bells, they're strong, menacing, for example at "As A Bell Tolls..." at 0:18, the bells alone after Harpsichord soft solo really set the mood of the Citadel and at "... The Citadel Beckons", we're already in the music with those bells.
Great work !