ok real talk this submission is fire and everyone keeps telling you how fire it is and i really wanna sit here and do that but im gonna be evil and give feedback
y'all always execute instrumentation super nicely! the first track is a great example of that - love these soundfonts... i concur that teto is a little unclear at times and i'm unable to make out what exactly she is saying, but i think it might be that the lower end is overpowering her a little bit, particularly in the second track. this is something a noticed generally, where sometimes the lower end can obscure what's happening. could be my hearing problems though! not complaining though cuz y'all write some SICK JUICY basslines CRANK IT
really like the way melodic lines are written in this submission!! very similar to jazz improv lines. i eat it up every time. i'm also someone who writes faster-paced melodies, and within this style, it's easy to compose a line that's super unclear with no tonal center. that's not the case here - everything has a clear shape! same thing with the panning - it's done thoughtfully and makes the tracks feel more immersive, as if i'm actively playing the game. continuing with the composition aspect, i really love your chord progressions. i don't know if y'all did it intentionally, but i heard some secondary dominants... abnd i love secondary dominants..... yummy slaps my big belly
i love these percussion lines as well! they're well written and drive each track with a lot of intention. the nature of this genre requires the percussion to be louder, but sometimes i'd say it goes a little bit over and becomes a little bit distracting from the melody. not to a significant degree, but enough to make note!
mindpolizei is a banger it made me do cartwheels and start clipping through walls i got written up by my RA because of this
dirty mind made me want to end my life
also i drew fiji ok bye
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