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hello!!!! thanks for the feedback....... i dont know about frozzy (almost pukes when mentioning him) but I sure do appreciate it!!

regarding teto being unclear at times: it was kind of intentional but also not really lol. the entire thing is inspired by the Persona OST which is not only known well for being unclear when it comes to vocals, but also treats them as "background noise" - for japanese people, english words are less distracting and blend in with the song more easily in-game.
why am I telling you that? Well, my brain is overflowing with Persona brainrot right now so that probably unintentionally slipped in here too without my explicit permission........

i'll be applying this feedback to my future vocal osts. even if the feedback is coming from someone with hearing problems...... (i trust you though so its okay)

much love!!!

this fucking sucks

mitosis

THIS FUCKING SUCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sounds in this were cool (especially the bird sounds!!!) but I think the songs kinda blended in for me... also the mixing is kind of rough in some places (like the FLEX slap bass in META-SILICA, for instance.....)

I wish the tracks were more diverse, but otherwise i think its pretty neat. much love!!!

dig the OST a lot, though I kinda felt like Toby over here at some points of the submission....

(the most "i need a fix in the mix" part for me were the drums in Conflict Euphoria, especially the kick.... i js didnt really feel it at all!!!)

also STYLUS RMX GANG!!! u told me you use stylus on the discord server but then I immediately recognized a stylus rmx sample in the last track so like....... its double awesome.........

much love!!!

a little bit of mixing fixing and its PERFECT!!!!! i dig this a lot....... the first song gave off Pizza Tower vibes to me lolz

mad respect for making this on fl studio mobile for realsies (i have nothing to say that hasn't been said here already..... much love!!!)

I get that you were trying to go for something weird and kinda off putting but I feel like you went a little too far with that... it's kind of a tough balance between making the listener say "what the fuck am i listening to" and "gah damn this is gas" when it comes to such music though so I don't really blame you all that much

besides that, my other biggest complaint is the fact that the songs are kinda repetitive and I ended up kinda skimming through the submission due to this.... much love!!!

the entire time i was listening to this i kept saying "oh my god this is juSTL IEK PEROSNA@!!!!!!!!!" (which is actually a good thing)

the only criticism I'll give is that Light was louder than the rest for some reason and I had to turn it down but thats okay i forgive you......... much love!!!

great vegetables.

(i'd say it could use some bass/sub bass though)

this truly was.... a finaly.

i agree with everything that jofes said

dude how do you DO this??? I don't even know what to say besides the fact that it's better than our submission in like twenty ways.... much move!!!

oh yeah hello toby fox

(jokes aside, I really dig the old-timey vgm music vibes from this!!! I think the mixing could be a liiittle better at times but otherwise its great. much love!!!)

I LOVE the yume nikki and OFF-ish vibes of this!!! The only complaint I'd have is that some tracks kinda feel like they're repeating? but I don't blame you for that too much because it fits. much love!!!

much like the person below has pointed out, you have potential... GREAT potential, even!! I liked MOST of this submission, but...

I get that you're trying to make odd-sounding music, but with that comes a challenge of having to balance both "what the fuck is this??? what is happening???" and "oh HELL yeah" which I think you probably have to work on, as your submission kinda leans into the former at times (especially in the first 45-ish seconds of Junesse...)

another thing I'd say is that some instruments sounded way too loud compared to others, but I think you'll be heading in the right direction as a composer if you consider my complaints!!!! much love

verity /vĕr′ĭ-tē/

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that's called an ostinato if i remeber right???

dont ask me I dont know anything about music theory in the slightest. I literally only know what a major and a minor chord is ✌️✌️✌️😭

(thanks for the comment!!! I will be checking your submission out on the 8th....)

if you died nothing in my life would change

yeah! you own 100% of the music you make. ideas arent copyrighted

woman

great OST, big fan of Last Summer Day and The Strange Figure Only I Can See!!!! got em jet set radio vibes

my only criticism is that most tracks dont feel like theyre from the same game, and some dont feel like they fit their "purpose", e.g. The Strange Figure Only I Can See being too energetic for a quirky mascot, in my opinion. speaking of that track, it feels like theres TOO much going on in the background

great OST, big fan of Last Summer Day and The Strange Figure Only I Can See!!!! got em jet set radio vibes

my only criticism is that most tracks dont feel like theyre from the same game, and some dont feel like they fit their "purpose", e.g. The Strange Figure Only I Can See being too energetic for a quirky mascot, in my opinion. speaking of that track, it feels like theres TOO much going on in the background

i ADORE this ost so much, it legit might be my favorite jam submission at the moment 😼 the mixing in some places was a bit janky (but only a bit!), and, as jofes has stated below, the cutscene song is a bit out of place. good job tho 😇

pretty high quality i must say 🙂‍↕️ however i do think that the first track was a bit too long and overstayed its welcome (i guess you could say that after a while it was.... unwwwelcome... haha get it......), and the songs arent too memorable, didnt quite catch my attention

cool submission, the most highly rated submission ive rated so far as a matter of fact!!! love the use of the harp(?) thruout the OST
i wish there was more written about the gameplay though, but overall i think this is prettyy prettyy peak 😼😼

peak😼😼

i agree. bossbeat was better

we would make it a full game but we would go bankrupt immediately 😇 thanks though!!!!

your submission sucks.

its as shrimple as that

holy shrit.......

this is a classical

this fucking peaks