Congratulations for coming up with this "environment" in so little time!
The mechanical sounds, the wind, the general atmosphere serve their purpose so well, according to your story.
I particularly enjoyed the melodic parts before 2:00.
The cinematic accelerando, as if something just can't wait to unfold itself and reveal a whole new world.
Also the way it shuts down and also literally "closes" itself!
I'd be curious to listen how it'd sound if the pitch got toned down as the music leaned towards its ending, more than you already did.
Overall the whole track sounded so polished and well-crafted, I really enjoyed it.
You really managed to transport us to a new place. It was an experience. Thank you.