i HATE this submission. TAKE IT DOWN.
jk hi jofes
i like your composition here! a lot of folks went for the folk vibe this jam, but i feel as though you achieved it in a very original manner. your instrumentation is done very deliberately in line with the story, which is a VERY nice touch! i like the chromaticism in "human township!" sometimes it can be a little jarring and out of place, but i DO like how it stands out from the more traditional folk style and adds something new to the mix. i very much like the bells of battle!!! you always compose SWEET melodic lines, and i always look forward to hearing them in your submissions. this is the case here as well - its fast-paced, but not without a specific tonal center and shape. i also really like "the citadel beckons" - the organ, the church bell.... wow!!!! incredible!! the visuals you added throughout these tracks are super helpful as well to help follow the story, great touch!
great submission ... as always!