I think the approach for the visuals were very interesting! I liked checking in on the book and seeing the new updates as the game progressed, I think it really helped sell the atmosphere. I think I would have liked it if were a bit clearer when Gerome was talking and when it was narration, but it was pretty easy to tell from context still - just a bit of mental delay when reading. Was caught a bit off guard by the animation, it was really nice to see! I think I may be a bit unclear on the ending though - I have my ideas, so hopefully I'm understanding things correctly.