The art in this is really cool! Love you you did the maps. Overall the text is well-organized, but I feel that the font size is a bit too small, especially if someone would print it. Font choice is also on the boring side and doesn’t do justice to the rest of the material.
There’s a few things that are not clear to me: Is this meant to be a gauntlet? Should the players roll random pilgrims to see who they are playing? If not, should all players be a cleric of sorts? and how should I use the pilgrims table? I’m also missing a table for random encounters.
Besides that, fantastic use of the theme, with every aspect of the module oozing with flavor and interesting ideas.