hi chiming into this thread
I love the game, I love your art/comic concepts. It's got the same energy as deltarune but with a personal spin - which is what you're going for it seems? I'll eagerly gobble up a new supplement as such ideas percolate for yet more campaigns to run.
"Small and flawed" is what gives it texture. It makes it personal and human, much more so than some of the things I've seen.