Still gotta go read through ending A, but enjoyed it so far, was a bit confused at first with the greyed out links, I guess those were things you haven't finished writing, but overall it was an enjoyable read, the art was nice, the guessing puzzle took me way longer than I care to admit, though I can't tell if that's just me being bad at guessing, or if they actually are really hard, might be both honestly seeing that the words aren't the most common ones and are on the longer side. But still, enjoyed the whole thing through and through. Though I will mention that the game lacked a bit in terms of sfx for both the UI and to better sell the environment, it could have also used a bit more ambiance to communicate the placement of the scene better, but I'm reaching a bit.
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thank you so much for such a lengthy comment! besides the first few instances of greyed out choices (during first checking messages) being intentionally inaccessible, later on, depending on your choices, the option for the ending you aren’t currently on will be locked. i will definitely try to implement more in terms of audio sfx and ambience if i were to expand on the game :)