I like the overall concept (the Sex Pass) but this VN needs actual choices. I don’t want to play a whiny, struggling MC. I don’t want to be forced to select specific pass women. Let me actually choose the partners and choose how my MC reacts to the situation and people around him. This was a kinetic novel and those are, frankly, boring.
Also, you have a section with visible code: “Jake grabs Gail's body and tries to lean her back.[/center]”
I mean I get it's still early access but it'd be great if in the future you could have choices as you say. Doesn't have to be something super developed, maybe something like choice A and B where A might be more passive or tactful and B more confident. I think picking them ladies could be solved by just letting you pick them in whichever order you prefer for when the VN is finished.
All this said, maybe it's just not the vision the author has, and they have a character progression in mind whereas giving you choices might not make that much sense. Maybe look for this on some other project?
