I sell pixel-art asset packs on itch, and one of them does not sell at all. I would rather hear why from people who browse this store than keep guessing at it from the inside.
Pixelkiln Icons Vol. 2 — 381 RPG inventory icons at 16x16, $4.95 (currently $3.71 inside a bundle sale), published 5 August 2026. 102 views and 0 sales in the month since. Two other paid packs of mine — same art style, same page template, same store — sit at 7/249 and 2/101, so 2.8% and 2.0% over the same window. The store works. This page does not.
https://z3er1n.itch.io/icons-vol2
Already done, so nobody spends a reply on it. The cover used to say "300+ ICONS" while the title said "380+", and two screenshots showed an older 302-icon sheet; both fixed. The pack went 302 to 381 icons, and the sheets now import already sliced — a Godot AtlasTexture per icon, a Unity .meta with the rects filled in. There are 8 tags, a real tagline and 7 screenshots. On 3 September I shipped v1.2, which is why the page opens with an admission: a hash check found 11 of the 381 filenames shipping a picture that already existed elsewhere in the pack, so 18 icons were redrawn. That is on the page deliberately.
The free sample has not rescued it either. Both of my packs that do sell have a free sample, this one did not, so I shipped one on 2 September — 45 icons, complete sets, the paid pack's own files. It is now at 33 views and 2 downloads, and at least one of those two is my own pull to verify the zip, so treat it as worse than it looks. My other two free samples run 59/278 and 25/121, about 21% each. Small numbers, so this is not proof, but it is not the shape I expected.
Three things I cannot judge from in here. This is the cover at 315x250, which is the size browse actually renders it at — not the big version you get on the page:

- Does that survive as a thumbnail? I have looked at it far too many times to see it any more. My own worry is that forty 16x16 icons in a grid read as texture rather than as things.
- Do the screenshots answer "can I drop these into my project today", or do they only prove the icons exist?
- Is 381 icons for $4.95 reading as value, or as bulk? I am starting to wonder whether the big number is doing the opposite of what I intended.
Worth saying plainly: the sprites come out of a Python generator I wrote with AI assistance rather than being drawn by hand, so the page carries itch's AI-assisted (graphics) disclosure.
I have no game to swap a playtest for, but I will trade store-page critique — cover legibility at thumbnail size, tagline, screenshot order, tags, description structure. Leave a link and I will actually open it.