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I love the story concept for this, and while the graphics don't exactly speak "gameboy" to me, they look absolutely phenomenal. I know this is your first foray into game development, so nonetheless great job on your progress! Here are some notes for improvements:

  • The biggest detractor right away is just a rule violation, the main menu uses the cursor to select menu options which breaks the gameboy controls rule.
  • Even if it was just something simple like a "you won/escaped/rejoined the hero" screen, it would be nice to have a win state condition.

It would be fun to see you expand on this idea and what kind of gameplay could become of this. Great job!

AHH I completely forgot about the initial mouse!!
and yes the win statement wasnt there because this actually only shows a segment of it, you were originally supposed to meet berry (she is in the screenshot) through the tunnels, get a broom through her, clean the throne room then leave. But youre right,


I appreciate the feedback! (Not to mention the upload help lol)