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Overall, I enjoyed playing this game.  The art and sound reminded me of old PBS shows on a CRT, which was a nice touch.  The music was good as well.

As I put the sentences together, the dread of where the story would go built up nicely, and the twist in the last sentence was not what I expected at all.  I also loved how the distortion at the bottom of the screen slowly crept up once I realized it was doing it.

I didn't experience any bugs while playing.  The sentence building did feel a bit slow, though.  It might be better to maybe have two sentences per screen to add the missing word two, just so it doesn't feel like it's taking too long to get to the meat of the game.  

Also, the phrases the caterpillar-looking creature got repetitive; it would be nice if it had unique ones as the story continues.  I do appreciate that they also show the text of what he says in case I missed it and for my viewers who might struggle with making out some words.

The monster at the end was delightfully cursed-looking, and the ending left me curious as to where it would all go.

VOD link: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/2881486951?t=01h48m15s

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Hi Collectonian!

Sorry for the late reply...I've been very busy with work lately, but I do appreciate you taking the time to write feedback for the game. I'm glad that the build up of the dread worked, but you're right that the sentence building is a bit slow. To solve this, in a future build I might change the drag and drop functionality so that it is click to fill in the blank to make it go faster. As for the repetition of Barry's voice lines, I think I might make it so that he offers a response every other answer. Thanks again for playing!


Sincerely,

Gob-a-gooble-gooo 🐔