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Hi.

It's interesting, in that the MC has the option to "show interest" on his GF's friends which I wasn't expecting because "Not an NTR phone game!". I did eventually thought that the accidental sync could be not-accidental but something that Gaby pulled off and was meddling with for "reasons", but her character doesn't seem that kind of person.

Just like Tengrikun, I got stuck on the thread with Gaby "thinking about relationships" and then the hypothetical pick. I tried out several things, nothing worked, exited the game and reentered it, it started with the call from Bomi that hadn't played before despite being mentioned and that I had already forgot about, lol. After the call, the chat with Gaby and the picking question restarted and the game progressed normally.

Now I don't have time, but later I'll try again but with a more faithful Miles (no hitting on other girls). Regardless, the girls of the group are interesting plus Megan and Fred. Amusingly, I ended this first run feeling that I got to know Gaby's friends better than Gaby herself.

I like the interface of the game, very clean. I suggest implementing some sort of notification for when a new Glimpse image is available. Also, for someone who's been on a steady relationship (for years?), only one photo of the couple on the cellphone? No selfie with Fred? Or a photo of big annoying brother? Not complaining, but it could offer more background.

Anyway, following. I wish you the best of luck developing this project, and that you'll enjoy it.

Cheers!

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Got the same feeling of knowing the friends more, it's kind of a problem of the genre imo where to better self insert your relationship the main characters tend to be fairly bland. Ironically it lends itself well to the NTR/Sharing genre well because it makes it easier to say, "yeah I'd prefer someone else too." 

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Yeah, that's fair, a "blank" protagonist was partly a deliberate choice to make self-insertion easier, but I could definitely give him more characterization without losing that. And Gaby specifically probably comes across as blanker/blander than the other girls, who get a lot more distinct development through their own routes and dialogs. Good point, I'll take it into account going forward.

Also, I don't want the temptation routes to feel like an easy/obvious choice, so fleshing out Gaby's own route is probably the right way to balance that out rather than flattening the others.

Thanks for your comment !

No problem. Glad to help. o7

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Thank you for your comment !

I did fix yesterday the bug pointed by Tengrikun (thanks again for that), and it should already be live, maybe you started playing before I pushed the update and your browser was probably still running the old code.

Really appreciate your feedback about knowing Gaby's friends better than Gaby herself, it's an interesting point for how I should balance the "temptation" routes vs. the core relationship. The Glimpse notification idea and the extra background photos are both valid points to improve the backstory.

Thanks for taking the time to write all this out!