This is such a good bit of writing , the theme is so evocative and the way the rooms are laid out is really clever. On top of that , when I read the section on Take Down Methods I had to stop and giggle wildly because it was both so entertaining and so alarming at the same time . You have a real talent for hitting both of those tones at the same time , my goodness. The one thing that didn't quite seem to work were the terms "calm" and "clarity" . I couldn't find a definition of those terms anywhere or the mechanical effect that increasing them has. As far as I can tell, you can only interact with humans by rolling a die whose size is determined by your intel so it might be worth clarifying (haha) where calm and clarity fit in.
Other than that, it's such fun to read. I'm looking forward to seeing the formatted version :)