Thank you for the intriguing world building! The animations and visual effects really contribute to the immersion.
It seems the game has potential but it very much depends on how you develop the gameplay further - is it going to be a grid based top down game and the platforming remains a mini game? Or is it just the introductory cutscene in a top down style and the rest of the game is a side scroller?
Maybe you will find my take on the tactical genre interesting.
Good luck!