Great concept and very pleasing adventure hook!
What I thought worked well
- Visually neat and striking. I love the title twist with Forbidden being hidden from the cover. Efficient.
- Very simple and easy to read. Tight and focused and to the point.
- Great simple concept. Nothing revolutionary but right up my alley and easy to pick up and start ideating.
What I thought could be improved
- Despite the focus, simplicity and brevity, this comes at the cost that it does feel a bit lacking in content and the GM needs to fill in a lot in my opinion. Maybe some roll tables or a system around how the fungi spread?
- The map and locations lack some interesting elements for the most part. Some key items or events. Not even sure where the body is (but I can guess)