Hi rantdomly! I checked out the page and I think the game looks really interesting! One thing I’d experiment with is making the first few seconds of the page more focused on showing the gameplay. Maybe a gameplay video right near the top could help visitors quickly understand what the game actually feels like.
The free demo is also a great idea, but I’d make it a little more prominent and explain what players can expect from it. That might encourage more people to give it a try. 😊