Okay here's everything wrong with this
1. HOLY SPELLING MISTAKES (I apologize if English is your second language)
2. Even if English is not Neko's first language that gives him an excuse for bad grammar and spelling NOT bad writing.
3. If your complaining about how long that was then why are you reading tfc dude.
4. You're a hypocrite and calling them a bully when they are explaining what they didn't enjoy about the game. Meanwhile you are calling them a dumbass.
5. It's called constructive criticism sweetheart. Instead of complaining about them commenting maybe don't read it. Also it's not like they're leaving hate comments and threatening Neko's life or something.
6. Okay cute drawing I actually have nothing bad to say about this bit other then why is Pierrot in blood in it?
7. HOW DARE YOU NOT CAPATALIZE COLUMMBINA'S NAME!
8. This is like number one but it's just your grammar and how your using pmo and asf.
9. This isn't your fault but the communities, you have tons of upvotes despite the fact that you are being a jerk to someone.
10. This is just my personal opinion here. You are a jerk
That's about it, don't send hate comments to critics not everything is loved by everyone baiii.