I like how good the Ambient Sounds overall (Water rushing, Birds, etc.), but I'd probably lower the volume on them a bit. I do like how haunting the Soundscapes you used were, like the Shimmery Bells, but I'd also not have as much startling elements, as of the really loud water dripping & that.. (They were rather ditracting) just lower the volume a bit, and you're good! Basically, the volume could've been better in a few parts, but this is still fine work!