Considering the double submission, I'll only be rating this one.
I don't think it's a bad submission, but it's very soft and hard to hear a lot of the textures and tones here. It doesn't quite fit the hidden lakes theme outside of the frog chirpping and while I'm against the use of pre-existing sfx in composing jams I don't think it's bad enough to really justify bringing down the quality of the rest of the track.
I feel like if it was a little louder and had slightly more movement it would be a fine track.