Sounds great! I think you're right about the mixing, all the different instruments sound like they are different samples. I am also not a mix master but think you could mostly fix this with proper EQ and reverb adjustments, maybe some compression. Cool sound overall! The last minute when the arpeggio kicks in was the best part for me.
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Yeah of course! Not a very clear way to put it. All I meant is I can hear the individual character of the vsts, each is sampled in different rooms by different people and it's probably better to mix each voice so it sounds like they are together in the same room. My approach to this is usually tooling around with EQ and reverb on individual tracks, sections, and the master bus.