Whoa, beautiful story telling, at first i was kinda confused about the narrative direction but the ending made it sweet, love the concept, feels really original
To be honest, I was just as confused during writing, but I decided to let the subconscious do its thing. Perfectionism has led me to burnout in the first place, so I tried to switch the focus from the result to the process, and it was fun. Thanks for the kind words.