I liked the use of environmental SFX, I thought it added a lot to help put myself into the place you were creating. The chord movement kept me guessing where you were taking it and I really enjoyed certain sections like the rise from 2m-2m15. It felt a little uncontrolled in some of the dissonant sections but that could of been artistic discretion. I think there's a lot of potential here especially if there were more layers of melody. Fun to listen to and I appreciated the imagery you captured.