really good coherence between the tracks, it follows a story, but i would like to hear it all in one track, the only bad thing is that its so coherence beacuse all the tracks are really similar, i mean you can note the differences between each one but they are kinda redundant, you could have shorten it by a third and make it all one track and it would feel the same or better
its one of the best that i heard in this jam but i have to be constructive with my comment