some golden bough vibes here. i love that! 

The adventure looks like a bloodbath. Players are gonna go hard, the prize is well stated and very rich. It looks good for PvP too. 

Anything in this runs smoothly. Thumbs up, gonna play.

It looks like this is larger than an A5 page, so ideally, you'd cut the word count back (which isn't always easy!) to fit. Most of the first page, though, is probably inessential, and is in the "nice to have" category, rather than being mandatory for the adventure.

Extremely good font choices. Classic and thematic while still being legible.

Likewise, good layout (is it Explorers?), nice choice of art and good map. I'd also add credits to the file so people can know who's responsible for it all.

A number of typos throughout -- "The Elders know how to harness the Sanguine Storm crimson lightning" needs an apostrophe S -- but nothing that makes things unclear.

All of the treasures seem very high value to me.  Player characters who finish this adventure are going to be set for a good while.

This is a very attractive adventure, but needs a polish run on the writing. I would have an outside editor go through it once the judging period is over and republish it. This has a lot to offer RPG groups!

Beautiful maps! ... Love the premise of a hunt, and the dangers of the forest itself. Plus those factions who linger in the forest during the hunt, and those hunters who are a bit toooooo competitive. Lots of opportunities for the players. 

Fantastic layout with the left sidebar of NPCs. Great map, but the text on that page is quite small. Fun read and great at any table.

Thematic backstory. The NPCs are fleshed out nicely! Great map.

Would have been nice to have the rumors marked as true/false. Some small inconsistencies in the layout. Some Random encounters could be added when traveling from point to point.

Very well written and full of opportunities for the PCs to interact with. Liked the factions and the map. Good work.

This is a cool adventure centered around an event, I really liked all the thought that went into what secondary consequences an event like this might have, like the Skin Peddlers taking advantage of the suspension of rules to hunt people. The character portraits and the map are great.

Who doesn't love a hunt?

A few favorite things:

• Faction/character relationships! Tallus, Elders, Crone, Cheaters, neighboring towns, etc. Everyone has a compelling connection that isn't overcomplicated. 
• The point crawl has enough locales to feel expansive, but again doesn't get to be overwhelming
• The option of getting a replica of the Sanguine Bolt to complicate matters!

I might have missed it, but it doesn't look like the Skin Peddlers (horrifying) are found on the map or in a random encounter. Maybe they dwell at the Hidden Camp, rather than the Cheaters who dwell around the clearing? I'd also be curious to learn more about the Sanguine Storm itself! 

Very usable, great job!