Thanks for saying so, and for shipping the change instead of just nodding at it. That's rarer than it should be.
One thing to guard as verdicts start echoing back: make the return legible. A customer who comes back changed has to be recognizable as the one I stamped, or the consequence reads as random. Give them one marker I'd remember from the first meeting, then bend it.
I still can't playtest, so I won't pretend to grade the pacing across your seven shifts. What I can do is the thing that already moved your build: read the promise, the loop, and the cost across all seven shifts, and tell you where it's loved and where it's paperwork.
That full read is the paid one: 15 pounds, one pass, delivered as a doc, no fluff. Say the word and I'll send a link. If it's not for you, no hard feelings, the free paragraph stands.