Hey, thanks for your comment on my post.
Now i do want to establish that whatever i say here are things that came to my mind that might would help in the songs, but it's more what i would do then a direct feedback or improvements. It mostly apply to my style of composing and can help you as well or not or even you can use what i say and try to make changes for your own style.
First, i'd like to say that all the songs kinda remind me of the Twilight Princess OST, especially the twilight themes. Some songs also reminded me of Deep Docks from Silksong, with the atmosphere. I do like to think of these comparisons as a kinda of guide for the structure of the overall idea of the songs that i make, that way i can focus on topics like "how do they make this section interesting?", "why did they put these notes here?", these are examples oc.
Oh and also the mixing is really good in some aspects, so i'm focusing on more composition related stuff.
Overall, bcs i don't want to write an assay, i will sum up everything:
- I would play a bit more with the SFX.
- I'd give more space between notes in some of the songs. Which is something i forget to do often, that is to use silence as a tool.
- Work in the final section of the songs in terms of conclusion or connecting it with the next one. But it all goes to what you want to do with the album.
- Also, put variation on some sections. Even some little notes here and there can help.
- And i would stablish a motif for the album. That way i could be refering to it in new ways for each song, giving a sense of connection and identity for the whole album, besides each individual music.
Yeah i think this is all i thought while listenign. Hope it can be helpfull for you or anyone, since i think i gave some good tips that everyone can benefit from.