I love, when the title has additional meaning after you know the story!
I liked the story and how it played on the theme. It has this low-key, life-goes-on optimism that I quite enjoyed. The way the story builds is cool too, revealing itself piece by piece. Also- your writing is getting better and better! At some point it would be cool to see something longer than a jam-length game from you.
As for the graphics and audio... well... it's rpg maker- core! Not much more to say about it!
Gotta say- there are some GoedWare Jam repeat submitters whose work I enjoy each time and you're definitely among them. Keep it up!