I will echo that it doesn't sound very ambient. But you have cool ideas, and I think your composition is accomplishing what you described emotionally. Overall, it feels a little unfinished and could be cleaned up a bit. Different parts are off tempo and a couple songs end apruptly in a way that feels sloppy.
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Appreciate your enthusiasm, but next time wait to update your tunes until after the the voting period is done! The revision is sounding better. An example of the off tempo thing is in the last track, the piano and pulsing synth aren't playing in beat with each other and it's distracting. I'm no mixing expert, mostly self-taught, so my go to suggestion for learning is youtube, or just google anytime you find something you don't know how to do. Also spend some time listening critically to other peoples music, it's a great way to learn that's what the judging period is about. Keep it up!