I’ll just reinforce some points: good balance of textures, felt like there could have been more going on, lack of fade-out does feel abrupt.
This is subjective depending on the vibe you’re going for I think, but ill try to offer something new to consider. Specifically, I feel like your melody could have used more emotional movement. Like the melody felt a little more random and lacked real emotional movement for me. A sense of direction may have added that something else others were looking for I think. But also if you want it to meander, and that’s the vibe you’re looking for, ya did it!