really enjoyed your world building write up surrounding this. I expected a little more emotional movement from the track given your story, but it’s still very solid. I agree I think the mixing could be better for what you’re trying to do, but the current mix gives it a cool lofi quality you might be able to use in the future if you want to go that direction. I think with improved mixing that would also help people feel the movements you do have a bit more. Enjoyed this one!