I enjoyed the story, and I appreciate that my choices affect the endings and the other character too!
All characters are gorgeous! But their expressions are a bit hard to read, perhaps you can improve it with gesture or poses.
This is just nitpicks, but, it's a bit hard to read the text history, with light background and white text... Maybe the text color can be darkened or put thin black stroke.
Also, it would be cool if we can click objects in Cassian's room, since we can click objects in Rhia's room...
Overall, I like this VN, good job to the teams!