I really liked the story. The whole idea of having the different choices after the train crash, with each one letting you learn more about one of the passengers, worked really well for me. I also liked that the text is short and easy to read, so it never felt tiring.
One small thing I’d change is the amount of pumpkins and spiderwebs in the UI. I actually like how they look, but having them on almost every box/button made the screen feel a bit too busy. I think keeping them only on the main dialogue box would look cleaner while still keeping the same Halloween vibe.
Overall, the story kept me interested all the way to the end :)