Mystical vibes. Love how you waited to make the water appear. I found the whole piece very nuanced and organic. At the one minute mark the leit motif started to feel a bit repetitive, but the fact it appeared at irregular intervals helped to keep it interesting. There's a good pacing and usage of dynamics with the swells, and the percussion is specially tasteful. One can feel the nostalgia in these foggy waters of yours.
Ratings:
Execution: 4
Vibe: 3
Composition: 4
Listenability: 3
Correlation to theme: 3
(Rubric with my rating criteria: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1LEz4pyyHR7iQ75W2IFjA22odaeDNmdm-/view?usp=drive...)